Ⅱ. 范文赏析
假设你是李华,你的朋友 Jim 最近沉溺于玩电脑游戏,为此你很担心。请给 Jim 写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 你的看法;
2. 你的建议。
写作思路:① 表达关切 ② 表达看法,分析原因和影响 ③ 提出建议
注意:写作词数应为 80 个左右。
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I'm really worried about you because I heard you're addicted to computer games these days.
Playing games too much is harmful to you. It will not only waste your precious time but also do do harm to your eyes and study. What's worse, you may lose interest in daily life and fall behind your classmates.
I suggest you try to control the time spent on games first. You can also take up some hobbies like playing basketball or reading books to relax yourself. I believe you can do it!
Yours,
Li Hua